Guest Post: A Reader’s Testimonial About Outlining

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March 7, 2011 by Sarah D.

*Thanks to Marly Allen for this guest post.  Follow Marly’s blog at Making My Own Work. If you’d like to share your own experiences with the book, e-mail me at 90daynovel@gmail.com.*

I’ve attempted to write several books over the years and always got stuck because I didn’t know where the story line was going. One problem came in when I needed to switch things around, and got confused as to what went where. Making each chapter heading a different color helped, but it was really hard on the eyes, especially since the latest Word version only has pukey colors.

Then I tried writing the basic premise for each chapter in red on my Word document. That way, I could simply write (in blue) whatever struck my fancy at any one time, rather than having to first write chapter one, then two, etc. The problem here was that if I decided chapter one really belonged after chapter four, I’d have to highlight it and cut it, then scroll down and try to remember where four ended. It was madness—absolute madness!

Then I came across Sarah’s “Choosing The Best Outline Method For You” chapter from 90 Days to Your Novel. She said that the advantage of using notecards was that it’s easy to move cards around to find the best order; it visually breaks the novel into mini compartments so it’s easy to see how the story is progressing, and they are portable. That made a whole lot more sense to me. So, I simply transferred the major plot details from my Word document onto individual cards.

One problem I found was that, when the cards were in one neat pile, I couldn’t remember what was supposed to happen two cards in, so I spread them out on the kitchen table. That fixed that problem, but since the table wasn’t very big, I quickly ran out of room, especially since it is where I pay my bills, leave my gloves to dry, read two and three books and magazines at any one time, and, of course, eat my meals.

So I moved everything to my massage table, and you know something? It worked beautifully. As the table is 7×3 feet, there was plenty of space to spread things out, and still have room to write. With the table next to my computer, I can simply go back and forth as the spirit moves. Another advantage is that the surface is padded, which makes it much more comfortable on the arms. And mine has a table warmer!

Having the outline left me free to focus on bringing my characters to life and creating a new world, rather than continually wondering what happened next.  Now the problem is that my characters keep changing their minds, or withholding important facts about themselves until I bug them. Liz keeps tapping me on the head and saying things like, “This doesn’t make sense. If I was supposed to be here, then how come I was doing that?”

Having my characters continually question everything I write does make for a better story line. I do have to wonder, however, if Liz sometimes just does this to tease me.

–Marly Allen

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3 thoughts on “Guest Post: A Reader’s Testimonial About Outlining

  1. Linda Andersen says:

    Marly,
    You have a wonderful sense of humor. Do you think a large portable bulletin board would be a handy devise for displaying cards? That wouldn’t require the space of a table. It could be hung or moved around. I’m thinking….
    Linda A.

    • Marly says:

      Linda: Thanks for answering, and I”m glad you like my sense of humor; it’s about the only talent I have, so I’d better find some way to make it pay! Sorry it took so long to answer you; I have a bad fatigue problem that kind of wipes me out for weeks at a time.

      Yeah, I’m kind of thinking a bulletin board might be a better choice than a $150 massage table, unless of course, you want to become a massage therapist. Although my hall way, which is the only place in the house with enough wall space for a board, is only about 4 feet wide, and therefore, it would be hard to get far enough away to see the whole board, not to mention the lighting is lousy. And of course, I’m guessing it would be extremely expensive to heat the wall, never lone padding it.

      If you do decide you want to become a massage therapist, talk to me first. I can probably save you a whole lot of trouble. Yes, getting massaged by two guys at the same time on my first day of school was decidedly interesting, especially since neither one of them knew what they were doing, or had any skill at that point. However, it’s probably not too smart to make a career decision based only on that.

      Unfortunately, I haven’t been able to get to my own blog to post anything in weeks, and this has happened before, so I think I’ll be starting a new one on WordPress.com with the same name; www. makingmyownwork, but instead of (dot) blogspot.com, it’ll be (dot)wordpress.com, as soon as my head straightens up enough to write well again, though you can still check out the old one.
      Sarah, thanks for the good word; makes me feel good.

  2. Sarah D. says:

    Marly does have an excellent (and natural) sense of humor. That’s tough to pull off!

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